Wednesday, September 16, 2009

umm, i like taking trips

well,i like taking vacations, and trips.im acually taking a trip to L.A. this weekend, so i have to write before i leave. i am going to a off road event, the orange county fairgrounds will be full of sandrails, and dirt bike, and trucks. i am interested in all of this. then i am goiung to diseney land for my sisters birthday, and i am really excited for california screamin, every time ive been there, i was too little or scared but i came over my fear and now i love rollasr coasters, then, im juiced for the orange county flee market, there is anything you can think of and over 1000 venders. its gonna be awsome. i went one year ago, and it wasone the best trips of my life, and this time its gonna be better. i just passed my permit test today so im really juiced, but i cant driveon this trip because i dont have insurance an i have to go to one lesson of driving school first. i think this counts for my post, maybe next week i will talk about my trip, and how it went.

Wednesday, September 9, 2009

Why I Ride

Why I want to write about dirt biking is because it’s the thing I’m best at. I like to work on them, to ride them and to talk about them. I’ve been riding since I was like 6 or 7, and I’ve been around them forever. It’s m main interest , everything to do with it. I have spent a lot of time saving up for one, and my dad matches what I make. I’ve been going riding a lot, not recently because of school, but throughout the summer. One of the reasons I enjoy dirt bikes so much is it brings people together, my family and friends. When I go riding I go with a lot of people usually. I want to write about this topic and I think I can say a lot about it, I know a lot about dirt bikes. I used to look up new bikes, and race bikes. I can say that this I s my favorite thing in the world.

Also, I need to improve my writing, I have really messy handwriting. I usually get an idea and try to write everything down as fast as I can, but I need to slow down. I do okay with punctuation, I have to review what I wrote and edit, I do make a lot of mistakes. I move sentences and words to make it flow better. I think I’m an average writer, but I need to expand my vocabulary, for example. Use bigger and better words.